tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8631275127918377962.post6816897066974255497..comments2023-07-16T02:26:41.944-07:00Comments on What Should I Write?!?: I'm Taking a Risk of EmbarrassmentMellimaushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16673715214541094159noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8631275127918377962.post-20544577889206862962008-08-28T20:05:00.000-07:002008-08-28T20:05:00.000-07:00I liked it! You are a good writer! I LOVED the arg...I liked it! You are a good writer! I LOVED the argument! I can't wait to hear more!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04671858225170343008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8631275127918377962.post-43927886560838667452008-06-11T15:38:00.000-07:002008-06-11T15:38:00.000-07:00I can't wait to hear the rest of this story!I can't wait to hear the rest of this story!Mishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12481276051480116505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8631275127918377962.post-31532372827016579712008-06-11T15:37:00.000-07:002008-06-11T15:37:00.000-07:00I liked the argument -- about how Kaitlen says tha...I liked the argument -- about how Kaitlen says that Anabelle lost control of her riens while she was galloping (sp?). lol :) Then she was like, 'Such a good horse.' That was my favorite! You know, I think you should write and publish a horse book some day. You have real talent as a writer, and you know plenty about horses!Mishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12481276051480116505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8631275127918377962.post-19630160883297762172008-05-26T20:54:00.000-07:002008-05-26T20:54:00.000-07:00Ok, Bonus comment, two for-one special. You're rig...Ok, Bonus comment, two for-one special. You're right, the story was cheesy, in a "let's argue about what our horses eat" kind of way, but your writing is becoming pretty good! Not sure if I liked BRING as the sound of the bell or not, but I liked how the Anabelle asked Kaitlin "dryly" about her pony :DUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09378190807994882867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8631275127918377962.post-10952571624209534502008-05-26T20:47:00.000-07:002008-05-26T20:47:00.000-07:00Hey I haven't read the story yet, but would love t...Hey I haven't read the story yet, but would love to point out that you wrote "udder embarrassment" instead of "utter." Udder is where we get milk, while utter means complete and total. Haha :-) Now I'll read your post.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09378190807994882867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8631275127918377962.post-53915280469634410622008-05-21T06:47:00.000-07:002008-05-21T06:47:00.000-07:00Well, that sounds like a 'realty story'.... out of...Well, that sounds like a 'realty story'.... out of your world! I think you used good words. <BR/>I found one 'typo'...stare instead of 'stair' (at Anabelle, was that her name?)<BR/>Keep up the good work! You ARE a writer!!Gudlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14303135063780904921noreply@blogger.com